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Darkness Shadows ... by ~MyownCreep:iconMyownCreep:



Darkness shadows forgotten happiness
Rain weighs on the needed and desired bliss
Misery and depression fills and spills all over
Thrill is buried and now vanished with no trace
Sorrow piles stacking , towering and swarming
Cynicism wraps tighter weaving and spiraling
Distorted rhythms twine and emerge
A hollow cavity digs deeper eating at sanity
enraged cravings crawl within the abyss
Remorse repeats its self in an unshakable melody
Body tremors and head pulsates frantically
Building up to shake loose just one cold tear .
©2008-2009 ~MyownCreep
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Author's Comments

This is a poem I Wrote over the summer , last summer.

I hate the last part !! the rest of the poem i have no problem with , but the ending ...it sounds so predictable and it sounds like someone has said it...I just dont know what to end it with ...maybe I'll get it out sometime this week or some time in the future ..and change the last line...because i hate the last part .

no one crys one tear? i just dont know what to say ...i'll think about it.

I also made a second stanza at one point...but I lost it.

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